Declined Admin Application

[DIAMONDFIRE]

- Name: Amr

- Age:11

- Steam name + ID: khaledsalmona(Angel Medic) ID:76561198252677740

- Have you been an admin before and where?:I have never became an Admin but I loved to be Admin

- What servers do you usually play?:Jailbreak,Orange Etc

- Are you familiar with the admin role and commands?:I dont know All Commands but Id love to learn,

- Why would you be a good addition to the servers as an administrator?: I wanted to help the server from Any like People who Freekill and Dont Follow The rules Pretty Much So Id love to
- Anything else you'd like to add - maybe a bit about yourself:Well I Will be 12 And I love your Servers you really Do a Good job for It Keep doing that.

Well that's it for me, Id like to be a Part of the Flux.Tf Team

 

[8-Bit_Kitsune]

Original post by Mr. (Deleted by Accident):
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I have witnessed many applications and I have a good sense of what Flux wants to see in these applications. Because of your age, I want to try to give you another opportunity to improve your application and a higher chance of getting accepted. I like the effort in applying, but this application would be an easy rejection because of three main reasons: GRAMMAR/PUNCTUATION, CONTENT, AND FORMAT. DO NOT BOLD YOUR WHOLE APPLICATION (Make it so the question and your response are easy to be distinguished). Also, you have many words that are not necessary to be capitalized. Adding to that, you are not very descriptive in your in your app.

But, I have played with you numerous times. Your age is 11 BUT you are extremely mature. You have mastered most of Jailbreak rules and almost online every day.

If you decide not to change your application, I will, unfortunately, have to give this application a THUMBS DOWN.

I HIGHLY RECOMMEND you to redo your application and that being an admin and this young age is not impossible.

Good Luck!
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I'm moving this back to the Applications page, this shouldn't be archived.

 

[8-Bit_Kitsune]

I'll give my say on the application later, too.

 

[DIAMONDFIRE]

k.

 

[8-Bit_Kitsune]

If any of you are viewing this post, there is an updated version.
http://flux.tf/index.php?threads/admin-application-retrying.437/#post-609