Declined Admin Aplication

[Undead]

Name: Hello, my name is Hugh, and i am applying for a position as admin on your servers.
I am 17 years old and i am from Connecticut, my Steam ID is STEAM_0:1:58929986 and my IGN is Undead and it originated from my Runescape name Undead4life3 which came from the rock/metal band Hollywood Undead.

Have you been and admin before? : I have not been an Admin before on any server, but I hope that this server will be my first.

What servers do you mostly play? :The server I mostly play is Jailbreak, and if im not playing Jailbreak im playing casual, and if im not playing casual then im playing V.S Hale.

Are you fimiliar with Admin role/commands? : I do have knowledge of the commands and of computer commands in general, and I am willing to learn all the commands that i need to be a good productive admin.

Anything you'd like to add? : Lastly, I play 5 instruments, Guitar, Bass Guitar, Uke, Drums, and Cello, I also play Football and Lacrosse, but ive player basketball, soccer, and hockey when I was younger. I play other games such as Counter Strike:Global Offensive, League of legends, and Hearthstone, and a little special fact about me, is that I am the 4th Hugh in my immediate family

I hope that you guys will accept my application and I look foward to contribute to the Flux Community.

 

[Mr.]

I played with you many times and you are a very experienced jailbreak player who has a bright future in this community. You are very friendly and has a personality that anyone can be comfortable with and I would be glad to see you on the team. However, I feel like you can conduct a WAY BETTER application than this. Therefore, I am staying NEUTRAL. Nonetheless, good luck with your application.

 

[adam]

So, I don't know to say about this application, honestly, we have enough Jailbreak admins and your activity has lowered down a lot, also given also how short this application is, I'm going to give a THUMBS DOWN.

 

[8-Bit_Kitsune]

Okay, let's take a quick look.

Pros:

• Formal Language.

Neutral:

• No Admin Experience.
• Plays on multiple servers, but only a few.

Cons:

• The application is too short, and not in much detail.
• Poor Grammar.

Normally when I'm analyzing other people's applications, I tend to go and list almost every single aspect of it on the Pros/Neutral/Cons list you see above.
But there isn't much to really analyze here.
Looking over the application, I'm going to have to agree with @Mr. here, you can definitely write a much better application than this.
In my opinion, this application deserves a NEUTRAL[:/], leaning onto a -1[].
Good luck!

 

[adam]

You forgot to add one in Cons:
Unfortunately, Inactive in Jailbreak.

 

[Mr.]

Now that @Jax mentioned it, you have been rather inactive for a while.

According to this screenshot, you haven't touched TF2 since June 25. I am sorry but we need admins who are willing to sacrifice their time for the community. Due to your lack of activity in the forums and the game itself, I will have to give this application a THUMBS DOWN.

Screenshot was taken on July 2, 2017

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[adam]

Declined.
You may apply again at a later date.